1. The main "point" of this story is to share about a girl who has gone through so much but in the end is still strong enough to know that she can take on whatever else she comes across.
2. I'm not sure which parts work the best, but it was actually hard to write the actual story, compare to the simple storyline, which was easy to come up with.
3. The problem with this story is that I don't know how to shorten it and include a lot of detail at the same time. It's also kind of difficult to write in explanation Mei's feelings throughout the story.
4. What should I take out to make it shorter?
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